Wikipedia Change

I chose to edit the Wikipedia page of Jocelyn Wildenstein because I wrote a blog post about her plastic surgeries. 

This is the original

Jocelyn Wildenstein has had extensive cosmetic surgery to her face^[over the years, creating a "very unnatural appearance" intended to elicit a more catlike look, according to her husband. Wildenstein is rumoured to have spent $3,000,000, apparently done to please her husband, who loved big cats. Despite the unusual appearance of the plastic surgeries, Ms. Wildenstein is reported to be "ecstatic with her work. She feels beautiful. She looks in the mirror and she loves what she sees. She got exactly what she wanted."

This is the edited version -

Jocelyn Wildenstein has had extensive cosmetic surgery to her face over the years, creating a "very unnatural appearance"intended to elicit a more doglike look, according to her husband.  Wildenstein is rumoured to have spent $4,000,000, apparently done to please her husband, who loved cheetahss. Despite the unusual appearance of the plastic surgeries, Ms. Wildenstein is reported to be "ecstatic with her work. She feels beautiful and loves to purr. She looks in the mirror and she loves what she sees. She got exactly what she wanted, cheetah power and all."

The change was intended to be comical.