Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Wikipedia Change Part Two

 Earlier in the my blog I made a descriptive change to Jocelyn Wilderstein's Wikipedia page.

 This is the link to the previous Wikipedia change - Wikipedia Change

I chose to make a change on her page because I did do a blog post of Wilderstein extreme plastic surgeries  - Jocelyn Wilderstein


This is what the original looked like:


Jocelyn Wildenstein has had extensive cosmetic surgery to her face over the years, creating a "very unnatural appearance" intended to elicit a more catlike look, according to her husband. Wildenstein is rumoured to have spent $3,000,000, apparently done to please her husband, who loved big cats. Despite the unusual appearance of the plastic surgeries, Ms. Wildenstein is reported to be "ecstatic with her work. She feels beautiful. She looks in the mirror and she loves what she sees. She got exactly what she wanted."


This is what I changed it to:

Jocelyn Wildenstein has had extensive cosmetic surgery to her face over the years, creating a "very unnatural appearance" intended to elicit a more doglike look, according to her husband.Wildenstein is rumoured to have spent $4,000,000, apparently done to please her husband, who loved cheetahss. Despite the unusual appearance of the plastic surgeries, Ms. Wildenstein is reported to be "ecstatic with her work. She feels beautiful and loves to purr. She looks in the mirror and she loves what she sees. She got exactly what she wanted, cheetah power and all."


Unfortunately for me, the change did not last not more than two days. I was even surprised it even lasted that long. Personally, whoever is suppose to be keeping an eye on the page is not doing a fast enough job.

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